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myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178) 6 years ago

He pulls you in with a loving embrace.

Caresses your body with such passion you shake.

Kisses your neck with the softest of lips.

Pulling you into such peaceful bliss.

Your body trembles at the thought of whats next.

He tells you relax while closing your eyes.

You hear something opening your senses atune.

The perfume of massage oil fills the room.

He massages you attenatively all through th night.

You wake to perfection from the dawns daylight!

 

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1. myLot reputation of 98/100. rainbow (3926)   6 years ago

That is really really pretty, tahnk-you for sharing!


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

You are very welcome and i am a big fan of reading and writing poetry! This is one that i wrote about a month ago or so!!


myLot reputation of 67/100. paulnet (719)  6 years ago

nicely written


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

I am glad that you liked it!!!


deniseee (37)  6 years ago

Thats really good,share some more with us.

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2. myLot reputation of 34/100. zukepr (11761)   6 years ago

WOW!
Whoever he is send him my way!! LOL
Well that was certainly a nice little break from the humdrum reality of my day!
Thanks for sharing that.


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

LOL...I wish i could because he exists only in my imagination until the day that he can become reality ... LOL! It is a poem that i wrote and all of my poetry tends to reflect on what i want fulfilled in life!


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

I think in poetry the approach is not what is important! I think that it i the content and quality of that matter more than the reason that is behind it!!

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3. myLot reputation of 87/100. michelledarcy (4379)   6 years ago

wow.....sounds like a perfect night.


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

I agree but it is just a fragment of my imagination! I guess that it reflects what i want in a relationship! I am a dreamer and i have my hopes set high for a loving, affectionate and passionate man!!

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4. myLot reputation of 90/100. yanjiaren (5095)   6 years ago

.that's great!...i wish but no such luck!
i l lay in my bed like a sitting duck..
am full of passion and for love i crave..
but looks like i sleep in an open grave..
no one called me beautiful or made me feel fine..
i could drown in my sorrows and drink some rice wine..
i fell in love deeply and i am so hot..
he says that he loves me..but in love is not..
oh what is a fireball like me thinking this?
i long for that love and that earth shaking bliss..


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

That is an awesome use of words right off of the top of your head like that you are talented! This is just a fragment in my imagination of what i want and crave also!

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5. myLot reputation of 98/100. candygurl24 (1036)   6 years ago

If you ever find a man like this, PLEASE ask if he has a twin...or even a brother, and send him my way..lol .

Great work...I enjoyed reading this. :)


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

Thank you and i will do just that! It would be nice if he does have a twin!!!

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6. myLot reputation of 90/100. margieanneart (16724)   6 years ago

Did you write that? It is so beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

Yes i wrote that about a month ago! I have alot of poetry and have even had one published also! Let me know if you are interested and i will start a poetry thread so we can read the poetry from around the globe!

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7. myLot reputation of 97/100. AskAlly (2978)   6 years ago

UMMMM Just what do you think you are doing with my husband!!!???!!! lol :)


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

ROTFLMAO...That is awesome ... LOL! You are one luckt lady if you have already founf such passion and love as i express in almost all of my poetry!! Thank you for the laugh as well!!!

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8. myLot reputation of 95/100. ScotsFerret (313)   6 years ago

Wow, thats really good, I wish I could write poetry but I'm usually not very good with words even when it comes to vocalising them. Although i did write a poem for my fiancé right at the start of our relationship when we were miles apart, I'll have to have a look and see if I still have it on the pc, other than that I have a couple of pieces of what I'm told is creative writing rather than poetry.


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

That is awesome either way and to me the definotion of poetry is getting yoru words down period. Have a look for your poem and share it waith us!

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9. myLot reputation of 86/100. mytwo_daughters (1367)   6 years ago

Wow! sign me up whoever he is! I wish I could get someone to do that for me. Especially when it is going to be below zero here in Feb. Not a bad winter however!


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

It is going to be minus 33 here tomorrow and yea i wish i had him too! All of my poetry that i write always tends to reflect what i want and not what i have lived! Never fear though because i will find him ... LMAO!!!

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10. myLot reputation of 87/100. Jakker27 (3892)   6 years ago

She sits by the window and waits for her love - cause he's a big stud and she likes it rough - her breath under window she sees his soft glare - and jumps though the opening to hold him right there -ouch-

Right then he confess his true love for her - The way that she kisses makes the fires in him burn - so now they are married happy and free - no more waiting by the window - now that he's with me

Anyway lol, that's a lovely poem ronita. Did you write that? It's very very good that. Goodluck


myLot reputation of 87/100. Jakker27 (3892)  6 years ago

ps Is poetry natural to you or did you study it?


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

Yes i wrote it about a month ago or so on my gather site! I also never studied besides in High School and i never really had an interest in until about 4 months ago or so! That is a great poem that you wrote though and you are always welcome to add any comment you like on my posts!!


myLot reputation of 87/100. Jakker27 (3892)  6 years ago

a natural talent :)


myLot reputation of 97/100. ronita34 (2178)  6 years ago

I guess so it must be natural as i was never into writing poetry until about 4 or 5 months ago!

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