Beauty and the Beast

United States
June 7, 2009 11:12pm CST
Beauty and the Beast Her beauty I see in full glory before me but my eyes may only feast for I am the Beast. My eyes they do seek but still I remain weak So rejected Always neglected I wish she were mine but my feelings are interwined with feelings I can't explain this only brings me pain I stand in the shadows longing feel she should be my belonging I am loved the least for I am the Beast
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@kalaga (550)
• United States
10 Jun 09
did i tell u i am enjoying your poems so much.u r really good in writing these poems.thanks so much for sharing them with us.i love poetry...but not good at writing in English.i write in my language.but your way of writing is different.it is really nice.
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• United States
10 Jun 09
Again, thanks for the warm sentiments. English is not an easy language to master. It's way too complicated for it's own good. Keep at it though... I'm sure you will improve as time goes by.
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13 Jun 09
Dear Beast you do dwell, upon my meer shell For the Beauty you can see is not the real me My heart has grown cold, withered and old Torn apart so many times by other lives trying to own mine I feel all your pain yet i scorn you again Surely happy you would not be if you were with me? I lie and I cheat, my lifes so obsolete Conforming to a view that others demand me to do If you were to take me far away by your side i would stay Away from others eyes always prying and snide Together we would be so alive and so free Forever in peace Your internal Beauty and my internal Beast. With love from Beauty.
• United States
13 Jun 09
Such a place doesn't exsist here... I'll play off this though. See my post "The Dream"
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