One step closer to publication.
By koopharper
@koopharper (7599)
Canada
November 20, 2012 3:45am CST
Haven't been around myLot much in the last couple weeks because of my NaNoWriMo effort, which is going along nicely by the way. Sometime ago I sent a submission to a publisher for my first novel. They were finally able to look at the submission and have now asked me to send the full manuscript. I'm looking at that as a really positive step. I think my story telling is better than my technical writing skills. I figure it'll be at least a couple weeks before I know one way or the other. I'm absolutely on pins and needles.
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@suspenseful (40192)
• Canada
20 Nov 12
I am sort of a perfectionist, and I need another draft before my novel is ready. I usually tend to write on it in the evenings as that is when my brain is working better. I am goof at stories, but tend to leave out details and the back story, so one character suddenly shows up. Also I am bad at math so since it is a fantasy novel on another planet, have to figure out how long the character took to leave one place to another and oops forgot that he had to stay at the inn, eat something, wash his horse, and visit his friends and that took much longer then just going from one city to another. etc.
Also I have to make some money to pay for the things online, so maybe I can only write for half an hour a day.
Good luck on your novel. How many drafts did you do and did you change the direction from one draft to another?
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@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
21 Nov 12
On this book I stalled during the first draft because I ended a subplot too soon and had to back track to finish it. It has gone through two major revisions since I first wrote it. Technically this is my third draft. There have been a lot of minor tweaks along the way. In the second draft there were major revisions to the beginning and ending. The third draft saw major revisions throughout. It was a comprehensive rewrite trying to work through all the constructive criticism I'd received from friends. The basic story stayed the same throughout though.
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@suspenseful (40192)
• Canada
22 Nov 12
I find that is better or the other characters will start to regard the hero as a big windbag and that lead for less time for him to get into action.
@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
22 Nov 12
I got to learn the lesson that a lot of backstory is better served up in dialogue along the way. That's one thing that made the latest draft a lot better than what I started with.
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@carmelanirel (20942)
• United States
20 Nov 12
Congrats, that is exciting and nerve-wracking at the same time. I am doing horrible on my NaNO, first too many distractions from my family, and then I got real sick. I am still not feeling that good, but I don't know if I will be up to trying, but I guess I'll see later on today if I am up to writing more.
Thanks for the update, can't wait until you are published..;)
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@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
21 Nov 12
Very exciting and nerve-wracking. My NaNo is still on pace but I'm struggling right now. I think I'll know by the end of the week whether I'm going to succeed in getting the final word count or not. Just have to overcome a bit of a block right now. When I hit forty thousand I think I'm going to pick up some momentum and then it'll wrap itself up. Parts of this new story is good and other parts are crap but hey this is NaNo.
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@carmelanirel (20942)
• United States
21 Nov 12
I am afraid that since I was sick for the last three days, that I may have to give up on NaNo this year..:( But that just means I have to concentrate more on getting my book published. Maybe next year I will be in your position, getting my book published and then time to work NaNo..
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@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
22 Nov 12
There's still a lot of month left. I think you can catch back up. One of the ladies at the Moncton library write in this evening is more than five thousand words behind and she's still plugging away. I have to stay on pace tonight if I'm going to stay with it though.
@bloggeroo (2167)
• Philippines
20 Nov 12
It is really nerve-racking to be waiting for "judgement day" on anything. But having reached that point, it is quite an accomplishment already. So, just hang in there and think positive.
In my case, I probably won't be able to stand the waiting period so I've decided to self-publish through Amazon.com. Hopefully, this decision will give me more control of the process.
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@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
21 Nov 12
It's true that just getting to this point is a great accomplishment already. I have considered self-publishing and failing here I might consider that. I'd just hate the thought of getting reviews that say things like: The story is good, but this author can't punctuate to save his life. I'm hoping that I catch a break here and move up to the next level.
@toniganzon (77064)
• Philippines
22 Nov 12
I hope your novel gets published. When I was a kid, I thought of writing a story but never really imagined getting it published. I know i'm not a good writer. I have a very creative imagination though but it's not that unique. I like to create stories in my mind but I've never put them into writing at all.
Hope to hear some good news from you soon.
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@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
22 Nov 12
I hope so too. Having the stories in your head is the first step.
@francesca5 (1344)
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20 Nov 12
that sounds like exciting news.
its funny, i have recently been active on helium, and they want people to rate other user's writings, by comparing two pieces of writing, and a few times I have read something written by someone where the grammar may not be perfect but the writing is much better and more interesting than that of the technically better written article.
so hopefully you will have an interesting well written novel that keeps an editor in full time employment, which is probably how it should be.
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@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
21 Nov 12
I am definitely excited.
It is true that you can be an interesting talented story teller without the technical writing skill. I think it's more important to be good and the former because it is harder to learn. Grammar and punctuation is always something that you can improve later or have someone help you with.
@STOUTjodee (3670)
• United States
21 Nov 12
Congratulations!
I'm sure your anxiously awaiting their decision. The waiting is the hardest part. I wish you the best of luck.
Do you have any hints to share?
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@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
21 Nov 12
Thanks. If I learned anything along the way, it's that your first draft is really only the beginning. I don't expect it to be that great the first go around because I'll probably have to virtually rewrite the whole thing before I'm finished anyway.
@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
21 Nov 12
oh m y congratulations koopharper I hope this means that they are going to publish your novel. I have one that I tried twice and it was not what they were looking for blah blah then postagebecame too high andI just gave up . Like you I can tell a good story but my tecbnical writing skills are not that good. I hope you really succed then I can brag I knew koopharper when heor she first was try ing to sell his or her novel.have not checked your profile to see if you are a m an
or lady sorry b ut I will. good luck I will pray you have real sucess





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@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
22 Nov 12
Well I hope to give you something to brag about. Sorry I didn't respond earlier. I put in a few responses the other day and then myLot kept telling me I was using non-standard symbols. Wouldn't let me post. I didn't have much time so I gave up. That happens here once in a rare while. It gets fixed usually before the day is out so I don't spend any time complaining about it.
Telling a good story is the real talent. Fixing grammar, punctuation and all is a different skill. I have gotten help in that regard from friends.
@blue65packer (11826)
• United States
21 Nov 12
Congratulations! I hope your book is published! I am sure waiting is very never racking! I have ideas for a book or two. I am not good at writing! I have alot of it in my head but getting it on paper never happens! I have a great imagination but I am not a writer,unfortunely!
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@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
22 Nov 12
Having ideas in your head and not being able to get them on paper is what NaNoWriMo is all about. If I didn't put me head down and plow through the story ignoring everything I know I'm doing wrong I'd never get the story down to be able to start working on it.
@hestylim (1209)
• Indonesia
21 Nov 12
Wow! I am happy for you!
I am completing my novel too.. ^.^ Very first one actually.. but I am going through self-publishing..
I heard about NaNoWriMo.. is it in thepoetryforum.co.uk one??
I just joined that forum like few days ago..
What is it about??
I am completing my novel too.. ^.^ Very first one actually.. but I am going through self-publishing..
I heard about NaNoWriMo.. is it in thepoetryforum.co.uk one??
I just joined that forum like few days ago..
What is it about??1 person likes this
@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
22 Nov 12
Tell me how the self publishing goes. I will consider it if I can't get a regular publisher interested.
If you want to know more about NaNoWriMo just visit www.nanowrimo.org. It is worldwide and very simple to get involved in.
@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
22 Nov 12
Oh no they're very sharp. Waiting is hard. Aren't I driving you nuts around the house?








