Haiku 3rd November 2015

Photo – Shakespeare And Whitman, taken by me
Preston, England
November 3, 2015 3:08am CST
1/. Speed writing haiku Because I’m going out soon Expect rubbish now 2/. Bill Shakespeare Haiku To be or not to be one Syllable short damn! 3/. Beetlejuice dances With Elvira. Wolfman Jealous at full moon 4/. Running out of time Bus timetable ensuring This work stays on ice 5/. Fog, mist, cotton smoke Watching the city swallowed Out undigested Arthur Chappell
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@PainsOnSlate (21845)
• Canada
3 Nov 15
You made me laugh out loud. On Gather,com (may it rest in peace) I tried Haiku and got pretty good at it. Thanks for the laugh. Loved them all - sort of...
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• Preston, England
3 Nov 15
not used Gather - glad you have experienced writing haiku.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
3 Nov 15
I like both 4 and 5. 4 because it was funny and 5 because I loved the imagery
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