Interruption
By inertia4
@inertia4 (27978)
United States
November 18, 2015 7:44pm CST
The simple becomes difficult
The beauty turns to darkness
The voice that speaks over
Drowns out the one of reason
What was nice turns to revolt
That sad state of ignorance
Is like a dark cloud of cover
The atmosphere is unpleasing
The temperature just got cold
I see the breath from my mouth
The light in the room diminished
It’s just now a faded glow
Is it a statement to be bold?
or to make it all go south?
Excises me, are you finished?
I cannot comprehend it now
The pleasure turned to pain
In an instant just like that
The mood was just turned off
Like a light switch being flicked
What is it that you wish to gain?
Don’t wait for me to tip my hat
You speak just words, only fluff
The anger within has been ticked
The sadness of the situation
Has brought it to a screeching halt
The time that has passed
Is wasted in thin air
You turn it to humiliation
No, don’t turn into my fault
What was trying to be said is lost
Nothing about this was fair
Let me end this in my own way
I will stop speaking and turn around
You continue on if you please
But I am done with this interaction
It no longer matters what you say
My thoughts are nowhere to be found
You’ve turned this into a disease
it is no longer a conversation
Copyright © 2015 Steven Cetta
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Tags: inertia4, Interruption, inertia4poetry
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9 responses
@poehere (15123)
• French Polynesia
19 Nov 15
Poetry is such a lovely way to express so many feeling.s I often wondered why they frown on it here. I think it would be wonderful if we could have 1 day a month set aside for poetry and anyone who loves to write could post an original piece such as this. I think many people here would enjoy this one so much.
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@inertia4 (27978)
• United States
20 Nov 15
@poehere Oh, okay, recipes are not easy to figure out if they are copied form somewhere else. That I get and understand. Personally I don't worry about recipes, so I wouldn't have to worry about that. Okay, so one recipe post, big deal. I am sure you have many more things to write about.
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@poehere (15123)
• French Polynesia
20 Nov 15
@inertia4 When I first arrived here on the site. I added one. it was deleted and told me it was frowned upon. I never added another one again. I thought it fell under the part of recipes and stuff like this. I did ask and they said they are hard to make sure they aren't copied from another place. I am glad you didn't have any problems with yours but I did with mine. I guess that was why I said what I did.
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@Rosekitty (19368)
• San Marcos, Texas
19 Nov 15
Even though it sound like a personal relationship having problems, it also sound like dealing with discussions here..with the last paragraph..very well said!!
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@Rosekitty (19368)
• San Marcos, Texas
19 Nov 15
@inertia4 I know but these two verses made me say it..
But I am done with this interaction
it is no longer a conversation
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@inertia4 (27978)
• United States
19 Nov 15
@Rosekitty Okay, I can see that. But I love MyLot and all the interaction I get here. And I do welcome everyones responses. I admire people who leave realistic comments on my posts. Honest and blunt is cool with me.
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@TiarasOceanView (70020)
• United States
19 Nov 15
Especially the last stanza Inertia, I find that more and more that is what is happening in the world today.
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@cindiowens (5120)
• North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
21 Nov 15
Sounds like someone had an argument.
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@lookatdesktop (27156)
• Dallas, Texas
23 Nov 15
Your poem is subliminal. Have you ever read poetry by Ezra Pound? Just thought I would ask.
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