Keith and Sarah
By marcyaz
@Marcyaz (35316)
United States
January 22, 2016 12:36pm CST
This is a story about a 25 year old man and a woman who is 28.
The story begins on a farm in Raxfield, Kansas.
Keith once left the farm to become a sailor however he is haunted by a traumatic experience at sea and came back to the farm.
He stays pretty much to himself leaving the woman to do most of the farm work.
Sarah at times tells him he needs to at least take a shower once a week.
Their relationship deteriates as time goes on.
He fears so many things especially being near water which upsets her as she is the one who has to draw water from the well.
She has told him he needs to gather eggs and feed the cattle or she will no longer cook for him just herself but it doesn't seem to register with him.
He doesn't seem to care about much of anything and will probably just wither away to nothing.
She tells him what a disappointment he would be to their parents if they were alive today.
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@VivaLaDani13 (60812)
• Perth, Australia
9 Feb 16
Damn I would love to hear more about this to see what happened.
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@Marcyaz (35316)
• United States
9 Feb 16
@VivaLaDani13 It would be interesting to know what has happened wouldn't it. 

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@VivaLaDani13 (60812)
• Perth, Australia
11 Feb 16
@Marcyaz lol yes it really would. I hate the suspense! Give me a hint? 

@Tampa_girl7 (54714)
• United States
22 Jan 16
I hope the story has a happy ending.
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@nanette64 (20363)
• Fairfield, Texas
23 Jan 16
Sounds to me like he was held prisoner and water-boarding was used on him @Marcyaz .
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@Marcyaz (35316)
• United States
24 Jan 16
@nanette64 Could very well have been but who is to know, tell me more...
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@nanette64 (20363)
• Fairfield, Texas
24 Jan 16
@Marcyaz Since the incident happened aboard ship, maybe the ship was hit by a torpedo and he was in the hull of the ship. The room he was in started to fill with water and his fellow sailors couldn't get to him until the room was almost filled to the top. He thought he was going to drown, ergo his fear of water.
@TiarasOceanView (70020)
• United States
23 Jan 16
What good I wonder was he doing for this woman?
It seems a very sad story.










