Onion Breath (A Poem)
By Steve West
@zebra2222 (5268)
United States
March 2, 2016 5:28pm CST
Onion breath,
Please be gone.
I'm sorry,
But it's much too strong.
Garlic breath,
The same goes for you.
Your breath causing me to turn blue.
Cigarette breath,
Stay away from me.
I'm disgusted by the odor
As you can plainly see.
I like fresh breath.
Now that is nice.
It's okay if it has a little
Sugar and spice.
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2 responses
@JudyEv (381760)
• Rockingham, Australia
2 Mar 16
Nice poem and you've targeted the three worst kinds of breath.
@lovebeingmummy2 (806)
• Aberdeen, Scotland
2 Mar 16
What I great poem and so true, although I do like to eat onion and garlic lol
