Sept 3 Words Hurt
@Hatley (163772)
Garden Grove, California
September 3, 2017 2:54pm CST
Watch the fight not right
SDhe; You cheat, saw you and Her
He: You lilar you did not.
She:' You make me sick"
He: dumb broad stupid
I wanted to yell at them
Shut up respect each other
In a garden you are fighting
She was crying now urt so bad
He passed me grinned
JHe said "wpmem you are all nuts
I frowned" you hurt her you jerk"
He yelled:You are all so stupid"
Three months ago they wed
Wedding cost six thousand dollars
Stupid may be as words hurt
They make blistering scars on yuur soul
She was a young friend
She married Ken whom she just met
Because all the girls in her set had married
He was from a poor family bit thats no excuse
Love, respect, honesty to me seemed lacking
I had never fought like that, my mate respected me
He never hurt me with unkind words
If we disagreed we talked it out not yelled ilt
Three weeis later I saw the paper
My friend had divorced her barely known mate
She told me she realized
We did really know each other."
Thousands of dollars does not a happy marriage make
Yoi need love and honesty and respect too
Kindness, caring, not sex slam bang thank you mam
Making love wiltn love and reapect takes some time.
I told my youn friend do not marry for wrong reasons
Just because all you friends just got marred
You will know when the right ma comes along
Iet him court you and remember you deserve real love.
One original poem and graphic by P Hatley
copyrighted 2017
T
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36847)
• Pamplona, Spain
4 Sep 17
Most I know don“t even get married at all.
However they do love each other most of them.
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@celticeagle (189792)
• Boise, Idaho
3 Sep 17
People get married too quickly and for the wrong reasons.
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@celticeagle (189792)
• Boise, Idaho
4 Sep 17
@Hatley .....I'd rather wait. Now looking bad I wish I had.
@ElusiveButterfly (45941)
• United States
4 Sep 17
Very well said Patsie. I have 2 daughters who have loved and lost. They are still hopeful that the right one will come along. I remind them not to wear their hearts on their sleeves. Makes them a prime victim for such losers.
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