Metamorphosis
By dave
@dave121495 (1294)
Philippines
November 1, 2018 6:14pm CST
Curled up by this spiral shell
Gotta stand up how many times I fell
Like a cocoon hangeth by the tree
One day it shall set free
As I gradually set open
Basking into the thin light
Like a beautiful morning
Giving it my all with all my might
Spreading my wings now to fly
Towards that big blue white sky
Silver lining still farfetch
Rainbow is far within my reach
As I move forward from midair
Trying to keep up the phase
Worrying if i'm still there
Gonna get there whatever problems I face
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3 responses
@dave121495 (1294)
• Philippines
2 Nov 18
Thanks, that was the imagery I was trying to portray for my poem, i thought i've failed in pointing it out. haha
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@CarolDM (203396)
• Nashville, Tennessee
2 Nov 18
@dave121495 You did an excellent job.
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@dave121495 (1294)
• Philippines
2 Nov 18
@CarolDM Thanks Carol, still i'm far from greatness.
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@arunima25 (93194)
• Bangalore, India
2 Nov 18
Beautiful poem! I could visualize the metamorphosis and it beautifully conveys the significance of it. We need it to survive against challenges of life.
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@arunima25 (93194)
• Bangalore, India
3 Nov 18
@dave121495 Your poem brings that much needed halt in this fast paced life.
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@dave121495 (1294)
• Philippines
3 Nov 18
Thanks Arunima, we need really to survive in this fast paced life.
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