Haiku 16th January 2019

Preston, England
January 16, 2019 8:51am CST
1/.Speed Writing Haiku How quickly can I do this? Less than a minute 2/. Premature blue sky Better than dark cloud Winter Doubt if it will last 3/. Icarus plummets At least he got off the ground My wings never stretch 4/. Three score years and ten? Two and six gone already Extension request. 5/. One way ticket class Mind the gap memory train Hard to find platforms Youtube - Eruption - One Way Ticket Arthur Chappell
BIENVENIDO¡¡ ACA TE TRAIGO LO MEJOR EN MUSICA DISCO , ENTRA EN MI SITIO Y DISFRUTA
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Courage7
@Courage7 (19626)
• United States
16 Jan 19
Excellent Arthur. Amazing what can be said in a minute. Yes Icarus..I envy him..at least he got somewhere. It was glorious for a minute.
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Arthur Chappell
@arthurchappell (44941)
• Preston, England
16 Jan 19
@Courage7 probably my favourite myth
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ARM
@responsiveme (22923)
• India
16 Jan 19
You got to try ,I expect.
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Courage7
@Courage7 (19626)
• United States
16 Jan 19
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Miss Nikki
@MissNikki (5234)
• Maple Ridge, British Columbia
17 Jan 19
That's great! Haikus have always been some of my favorite to write. I should start writing more of them. Thank you for the inspiration!
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Arthur Chappell
@arthurchappell (44941)
• Preston, England
18 Jan 19
@MissNikki hope you share some of them on here
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Miss Nikki
@MissNikki (5234)
• Maple Ridge, British Columbia
19 Jan 19
@arthurchappell If I do write some I will share
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Alfredo Rossi
@amadeo (111937)
• United States
16 Jan 19
No one not bad.Good job there.
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ARM
@responsiveme (22923)
• India
16 Jan 19
I loved 1 and 3. The others are good too
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