Short Story: The would-be Karate Student

Most good sports involve us in the use of both our minds and our bodies
@innertalks (23734)
Australia
March 17, 2019 11:17pm CST
John had wanted to learn karate when he was still a boy, but his father, being somewhat restrictive of the things that he would allow young John to do, objected, and prevented him from doing this. When John started working then, and had a little money put aside, this was the first thing that he did. He enrolled in a Karate school, under the Karate teacher, Susan Caroway. John’s thinking here was, that because he was a bit of a weak, wimpish specimen of a male, it would go easier for him, if his Karate teacher was a lady. The style of Karate this lady taught, was called, 'Hemkado", the art of the empty mind. This is good, John had thought to himself. Martial arts should be more about mind than muscle. The first class, though, was not much about the mind. It was all mostly physical exercise routines, except for the last five minutes or so, where the teacher had run them through a short relaxation cooler down exercise, using purely the mind to achieve this. She had told them to perform some push-ups in their minds, then to roll over, still in their minds, and do some sit-ups. Then they were to close their eyes, but look upwards, tilting their heads towards the ceiling, and then say the word “oomph” loudly 3 or more times, as they were comfortable with doing this. John said this word, and he felt sort of relaxed the very first time that he said it. The word carries an inner hum to it, and the inner vibrations calmed him instantly. Chanting this word is rather meditative, a bit like some Eastern meditators chant the word "Om, or aum". The word "oomph" though starts off calmly, and has a kick at the end. John had asked his teacher about this, at the end of that first class, and this was her reply: "Why do we use the word “oomph”, and what is the kick-in, abrupt sound at the end all about then?" Susan had replied: "Life is mostly to be lived peacefully, with the occasional need to add a bit of kick to it." "Such an explosion of explosive energy livens you up with itself, and so both qualities make for life, aliveness and docility are both required, at various times in life." "We chant the first part of the word in a long drawn out way, and then end it abruptly, at the end." John enjoyed his first class then, and he went on to eventually teach at this karate school himself, down the track, in several years time. We all need to live our own lives, and once free of his father’s influence, John blossomed at last then, by living his life in his own way. Photo Credit: The photo used here was freely sourced from the free media site: pixabay.com Most good sports involve us in the use of both our minds, and our bodies.
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@Hannihar (130150)
• Israel
19 Mar 19
@innertalks Steve, that was very interesting. Do you have more short stories you would like to share with us. There are some very talented people here. Thank you for that.
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
19 Mar 19
Thanks Hanni. I do like to write short stories from time to time, but I am a bit moody too, and I need to be in the right frame of mind to do so. I will try to write a few more here, over time.
@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
19 Mar 19
@Hannihar Thanks for your supportive comments, Hanni.
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@Hannihar (130150)
• Israel
19 Mar 19
@innertalks Steve that is ok. Whenever you want to share one with us just let us know.
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• Germany
18 Mar 19
Lovely story, thanks for sharing.
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@Shiva49 (28366)
• Singapore
18 Mar 19
The mind has to will the body. John made a wise career choice than follow the run of the mill. I am happy to notice nowadays parents encourage their children to follow their passion so that they don't end up as a square peg in a round hole. I was reminded of the Bard "There is a tide in the affairs of men, Which taken at the flood, leads on to fortune. Omitted, all the voyage of their life is bound in shallows and in miseries" when I read the relevance of "oomph" - siva
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
18 Mar 19
Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
18 Mar 19
@Shiva49 Thanks siva The Jewish philosophy more states, that our mnd, our body, and our soul have to be all aligned and synced together, for us to optimally live from love. Any opposition from any one part of ourselves is disruptive to the rest of us, and prevents us being our full selves then. Love is harmony.
@Shiva49 (28366)
• Singapore
19 Mar 19
When we make some choices in life, it is tough to retrace and regain lost time. I made many vital choices and I could have been a different person if I had followed other paths. I could have been positively influenced by a few though I would not have gone astray. I worked to live and I think I got that right rather than just living to work like some I see do. I keep in mind the present reality and scenario and do what I think is right in the circumstances. I put family above self as they were dependent on me. That way I couldn't really be like John to live life in my own way. Mine has been looking for compromises and finding stability. My father was a doctor but allowed us freedom of choice what to pursue in life. I ended up a qualified accountant and in times of self-doubt about the choice I made, I pacified my self that the accountant was the first to be hired and the last to be fired! I recall when we met our employer to start our career he said: "so you all intend to become chartered accountants, but I have seen most ending up as 'shattered accountants'". He seemed mighty pleased with that - siva
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
19 Mar 19
John was "lucky" enough to pursue all of this before he got married, rather late in his life. When we marry, we often put our family more first then, especially our partner, but it seems that you might have been selflessly putting your own family first, even before you got married. I hope though, that even though you could not live "totally" in your own way, you did live true to your own truth, values, and way of seeing, in following your conscience, and rightness. From your writing here, I know that you achieved this, sometimes, even at your own chagrin, at work. Your writing here, and elsewhere, has also reflected, I think, that at least here, you are mostly writing in your own way, but selfless again, you often do choose carefully what you right not to crush/offend anyone with your words. Just the same though, I feel your true self talking here many times over.
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
19 Mar 19
@Shiva49 Thanks siva. I can stand my ground too, and sometimes l am even tempted to play the Devil's advocate, to try to throw my spanner into the works... lol ...
@Shiva49 (28366)
• Singapore
19 Mar 19
@innertalks That is indeed kind of you Steve to say. I write from my heart and stick to truth and honesty. When we tell the truth and speak from our heart, we don't have to remember what we had been saying all along. Not blowing my own trumpet, I can say I live for others but that could also be, in a way, interpreted as selfish as my interests are also served thereby! I don't like to ruffle feathers and I would be happy if I have succeeded in spreading some cheer here. However, as you know, I like to stand my ground and make my views clear. You are also like me, I feel even less controversial. We are unique and hence not only shine our own light but also bask in others too and even reflect them for our overall benefit - siva
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19 Mar 19
He's a good, brave, wise son. I hope his story has a happy ending with his father. And he might marry a beautiful, good woman one day and be heroes together.
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
19 Mar 19
@everwonderwhy Yes, it sure is very sad. His father sort of become less volatile when he was older, but the relationship never really ever worked, for John.
19 Mar 19
@innertalks It's raelly very sad when relationships never restored.
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@FayeHazel (40230)
• United States
27 Mar 19
I love that you used a story to relate the point of a good sport utilizing both mind and body.
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
28 Mar 19
Yes, thanks. I agree, all good sports should help to strengthen both our minds and bodies.
@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
29 Mar 19
@FayeHazel Well, thanks again.
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@FayeHazel (40230)
• United States
29 Mar 19
@innertalks And I really admire your writing. Great point
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