Remembering Preiti
@allknowing (130066)
India
June 13, 2019 1:26am CST
While I was waiting for the technician to replace a part in my computer which could not be used till then, my thoughts took me to the time I had Preiti in my life and these were my thoughts
My forlorn thoughts just linger on
With our beloved Preiti long past gone
The decision to leave was her own
When she starved herself to skin and bone
Her blood count showed no bad signs
Nor were there any groans or whines
She lived her life to the hilt
We loved her so, we have no guilt
She just collapsed one fine day
Strolling around in her normal way
What a beautiful way she chose to go
Though it gave us a shocking blow
She gave us joy for twelve long years
I think of her shedding loads of tears
Goodbye our beloved little one
All our hearts you sure have won
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13 responses
@rsa101 (37948)
• Philippines
13 Jun 19
Very nice that you even were able to write a poem for her. I think that you loved her so much that you were able to compose this lovely poem of your own. I am sure where ever she may be she is happy and contented that she has served and loved you well as her master and a friend.
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
13 Jun 19
Thans.
We have had several pets but Preiti was so so special
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@rsa101 (37948)
• Philippines
13 Jun 19
@allknowing i can see that in your poem that there was a special bond between the two of you.
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
13 Jun 19
Her behaviour was so perfect in every way.
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@LadyDuck (457967)
• Switzerland
13 Jun 19
@allknowing It shows from your poem how much you loved her.
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
13 Jun 19
It will take me a while to get used to her absence
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@rakski (112925)
• Philippines
13 Jun 19
@allknowing I know. It is hard and Preiti cannot be forgotten
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@garymarsh6 (23393)
• United Kingdom
13 Jun 19
What a lovely verse. Glad you are able to articulate it so well! The trouble with pets are that they really become part of the family don't they!
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
13 Jun 19
We have had many pets but this one was special. She was a stray who just walked in as a pup. We did not train her but her behaviour was perfect in every way
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@smileyhema (4606)
• United States
13 Jun 19
Tears on my eyes too.. Very beautifully felt & written by a clueless mother.. Just loved it. Not sure why she left ...but she will be missed for lifetime..
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
13 Jun 19
I felt she just wanted to go. I almost felt like her telling us that she just wanted to go.
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@smileyhema (4606)
• United States
13 Jun 19
@allknowing : hmm, I could relate to that feel .. sad!!
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@PainsOnSlate (21854)
• Canada
13 Jun 19
You made me cry... We had our beautiful dog put down when it became to hard for him to do anything but suffer. He was with us for a long time first in Kansas and then in Ontario. His name was Ari.
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
13 Jun 19
We have put down a couple of our earlier dogs We had many, But Preiti just decided to go
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
13 Jun 19
I have just lost her and she was a companion
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@DianneN (246678)
• United States
14 Jun 19
@allknowing I know and I feel for you.. She was a smart and sweet girl.
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
13 Jun 19
We have had many pets in our life and each one was special but Preiti got the number one position
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