I Am Not Me (Poetry)

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
July 24, 2019 6:18am CST
The pour of our emotions Reaching the deepness of the sea All our crazy delusion Touching the sky can't you see Might we need to change our ways On how we sketch every star To draw the sun with its lovely ray To outline hope and erase some scar Not all audiences have an eagle eye Some just see the meaning of something On what it seems to be Their mind simply can't fly It was us, or it was them Who've understood not Whatever the artist painted was a gem Whether it's cold or hot Be responsible they've said On every word that you play To your readers, it wed It kissed them with no delay Might be quite true But should we fake our emotions To color each page with whitish-yellow instead of grayish-blue Just for the crowd satisfaction... 7-25-2016 Mysterious Aries
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@yanzalong (19091)
• Indonesia
25 Jul 19
It's a nice poem. I take my hat off to you for this piece of work.
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@yanzalong (19091)
• Indonesia
25 Jul 19
@simplfred Welcome.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
25 Jul 19
Thank you for your appreciation, my friend...
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@Starkinds (32737)
• India
24 Jul 19
You always wrote someting heart touching. thanks
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
24 Jul 19
I am glad to hear that, thank you...
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@Starkinds (32737)
• India
25 Jul 19
@simplfred welcome but it's true.
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@franxav (14588)
• India
24 Jul 19
So true. I am not me too.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
24 Jul 19
I am glad that you can relate by. Thank you.
@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
24 Jul 19
This reaches into the soul of so many!!
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@debjani1 (7202)
25 Jul 19
This poem is no doubt a good one. So hat's off to you.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
25 Jul 19
Thank you so much, my friend...
@Nakitakona (59987)
• Philippines
25 Jul 19
Good poem written 3 years ago.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
25 Jul 19
Thank you, my friend.
@cherigucchi (15934)
• Philippines
24 Jul 19
A masterpiece indeed!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
24 Jul 19
Thank you there, Kabayan!
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@Miss_Leafy (4296)
• Colombia
24 Jul 19
Very nice poem.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
24 Jul 19
Thank you so much,...