Hello October
@Nakitakona (56302)
Philippines
September 30, 2019 6:36pm CST
On this month
I made my first cry
From a lowly home
My mother gave birth
Caring me
Making me grow well
Out of poverty
My parents did it
Trying time
Unavoidable
Sickness got me through
Weakling as I am
Only me
That was all I can
For my ignorance
Carried me away
But mother
Assured me so fine
There's a loving God
Who takes care of me
Emptiness
Caught me flatfooted
Of trials I couldn't
Hold on to the end
Rest assured
My prayer of faith
God answered on time
Thankful so I am.
(C) Gilcamporazo October 2019
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@anil02 (24688)
• India
2 Oct 19
@Nakitakona I will try to remember it, Yours birth date is 13 October, If I am right it is also birth date of my son.Today is 150 birth anniversary of Mahatma Gandhi. Today is also birth anniversary of Ex PM and free dom fighter, Lal Bahadur Shastri.
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@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
2 Oct 19
@anil02 That's right. It's a double celebration with my wife. We have a synchronous birthday.
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@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
2 Oct 19
Today is October 2. It's 11 days more to go.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
30 Sep 19
Nice tribute to your mother... Happy Birthday or should I say Happy Birthday in advance...
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@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
1 Oct 19
Thanks. It's in the 2nd week of October.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
1 Oct 19
@Nakitakona Oh, I see... So, your turning 21 right... Just kidding...
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@ptrikha_2 (45463)
• India
5 Oct 19
Wonderfully written! There is nobody like mother. I lost my mother in 2008, and I still remember my days spent with her.
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@RasmaSandra (73368)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
1 Oct 19
Wonderful and heartfelt poetry. Enjoyed,
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@GreatMartin (23677)
• Ft. Lauderdale, Florida
1 Oct 19
I love reading poetry and some day I might be able to write it--well more than roses are rd and violtes are blue!
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