Nearly Broken Ring... / myLot

@simplfred (20641)

Philippines

October 30, 2020 6:15pm CST

I think, I don't have enough tears now If you decide to break your vow You know how hard I've tried to fix all things Just for us not to have a broken ring... Oct. 31, 2020 Mysterious Aries

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CarolDM

@CarolDM (203396)

• Nashville, Tennessee

31 Oct 20

You are very talented.

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Frederick Espiritu

@simplfred (20641)

• Philippines

31 Oct 20

Thank you so much, my friend...

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SHOHANA

@SHOHANA (16093)

• Bangladesh

31 Oct 20

Nice poetry but I was expecting few lines more. Keep it up

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SHOHANA

@SHOHANA (16093)

• Bangladesh

31 Oct 20

@simplfred ok thanks for sharing

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Frederick Espiritu

@simplfred (20641)

• Philippines

31 Oct 20

Thanks... Maybe on my next poetry I will make more lines...

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Thelma

@thelme55 (79311)

• Germany

31 Oct 20

Wow! Good one.

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Frederick Espiritu

@simplfred (20641)

• Philippines

31 Oct 20

Thanks, my friend...

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