Three Chapters Edited, More to Come
By Jordan Lader
@JordanLader (7386)
Sparta, Tennessee
December 1, 2020 9:43am CST
I've been working on Together for Christmas for about a month now.
I have nine chapters and a prologue which are doing well. I love the flow of it but I'm not happy with the male character.
With that, I went back to start editing some. I got the first three done and hopefully if things keep going the way are, I'll be able to fix some more of it.
I really need to share it across the platforms again. I only share on Facebook and Twitter but it works.
I'm excited to keep going and the goal is still the same.
The goal is to finish this one before Christmas. I haven't finished any of the other stories yet but this one seems to be capturing my attention. I think I might actually be able to do this.
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@JordanLader (7386)
• Sparta, Tennessee
1 Dec 20
lol I do that often. Right now this is the first edit and it's more to try and figure out where I turned my one character into a blah character.
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@porwest (112717)
• United States
2 Dec 20
@JordanLader Usually I will do a mass first edit, then the second and (if I get to a third) are much less strenuous. I rarely go beyond that.
But definitely, fixing a character is a huge thing, especially considering how important characters are to carrying out the story line.
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@JordanLader (7386)
• Sparta, Tennessee
2 Dec 20
@porwest My goal is to finish the story before I edit unless there's something that I missed or need to fix that's major
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@JordanLader (7386)
• Sparta, Tennessee
1 Dec 20
I don't know. If I can finish it, my first thought was Harlequin. It's the first time I've actually tried to meet a word count and it's harder than it sounds.
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