A short parable on humility, and pride
By emptychair
@innertalks (23734)
Australia
November 10, 2021 10:20pm CST
There was once a great writer, named Dave Hedgling, who had a certain pride in his own work, as he was paid well for each book that he wrote.
Then, he lost the ability to write, and he was all written out, was his feeling.
He realised a change was needed.
So, he joined a monastery, and instead of writing, he meditated for long hours each day.
After several years of this, he wrote a sentence down in his notebook, which said.
"Humility is built on love, not on pride. A hard lesson for anyone to learn, yet alone me."
And so, he became then a writer of spiritual books, rather than of crime novels.
Instead of pleasing his mind with his writing, he was now pleasing his heart.
Writing creates pride of accomplishment in it, only removed, when we write for love, not for life's rewards.
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The writer had found living life in his library, rather than his just settling for outer expiring riches, anymore.
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@DocAndersen (54399)
• United States
11 Nov 21
first i love the picture!
second, i truly love this message. i cannot tell you how much it resonates for me, beyond simply saying YES!!!!!
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
11 Nov 21
Thanks, Scott.
With such high praise, I hope that I reread my own story, and put my pride aside too, and so follow my character's direction too.
I liked the picture too. As soon as I spotted it, I knew that it was right for this story.
@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
13 Nov 21
@DocAndersen Yes, without becoming too visionary on either side.
Our vision, visions, can help the world, but the world can help our vision, visions, too.
@DocAndersen (54399)
• United States
12 Nov 21
@innertalks that is the journey we all must fight to stay on, reconcile the world and our visions!
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@Deepizzaguy (122070)
• Lake Charles, Louisiana
11 Nov 21
That is great advice since now I know that I should write fan fictions on Archive Of Our Own based on love of seeing justice being done and happy endings and not expecting everyone to pat me on the back since Wordgirl is basically a kids cartoon character.
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
11 Nov 21
Thanks. Yes, the oddly named company "Soup2nuts", that produced the show Wordgirl closed down, a few years ago, even before the last episode was aired.
She must of gotten sick of chasing bad guys, but she would have been still too young to have entered a nunnery, as my character did here, in my story.
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@Deepizzaguy (122070)
• Lake Charles, Louisiana
11 Nov 21
@innertalks Her character was around 12 years of age.
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@Shiva49 (28366)
• Singapore
11 Nov 21
Spiritual books live forever, soothe our heartbreaks, and bring us back to the original reality that life here is more than material accouterments.
This writer had a higher calling that he heeded although he had to give up his earlier path. He had honed his skills though with years of practice in the art of writing.
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
11 Nov 21
Thanks, siva.
Yes, spiritual books, containing truth, do last forever.
The only other books that have lasted a long time, are dictionaries, and Shakespeare.
Dictionaries at least contain the word, "truth" in there somewhere, but Shakespeare?
There must be an element of truth in his writings too, I guess.
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@innertalks (23734)
• Australia
13 Nov 21
@Shiva49 Once something is labelled as scripture, it seems to live on, and on, like the Koran, the Bible, the Torah, the Upanishads, etc. etc. etc.
@Shiva49 (28366)
• Singapore
12 Nov 21
@innertalks Yeah, I heard about Shakespeare the moment I started learning English. His writings appeared far removed from the environment I grew up in.
I think he made us think of the possibilities with a creative mind. I also think of writers from yonder who produced works that live on and on. Yes, our creator knows how to sprinkle talents all over.
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