Ode on Melancholy
By Shizuka
@choijungeun (2710)
Hangzhou, China
February 3, 2022 11:25am CST
She's a gloomy girl that watching those stars,
leaves her poems on desk with cold coffee.
Who could understand her disillusion?
In wild forest of wolves,an escapee
By the river,she dreams to catch those stars,
the verses to his love is Klein blue,would
he know her wave-like love in later spring?
Above sky,she dances among lilacs.
Rowing alone in the soundless night,wind
kisses her face gently from the redwood.
Banks of rill,fireflies fly to her hand,
stretching out her fingers,touch dream flakes.
What's melancholy to young girls in love?
Missing lost lovers,snow in February
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5 responses
@RebeccasFarm (91299)
• United States
5 Feb 22
You have a gift beyond measure. I understood the use of your words perfectly.
You know I am your number 1 fan.
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@choijungeun (2710)
• Hangzhou, China
5 Feb 22
To be honest,i'm really touched.You always comment my poems and give me nice encouragement.Thank you very much.Have a good day
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@RebeccasFarm (91299)
• United States
5 Feb 22
@choijungeun I am glad that you get a good feeling of my humble admiration for your most eloquent gift.
To possess this gift of conveying such beauty of the human spirit is quite rare.
I recognize you from afar.
Keep writing!!
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@choijungeun (2710)
• Hangzhou, China
14 Feb 22
Thanks for commenting,i'm so glad to hear this
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@choijungeun (2710)
• Hangzhou, China
7 Feb 22
it's a story i made up,i never have a relationship.So i don't know what the true loving relationship is.I just wrote it by my hunch to those romance stories.
@choijungeun (2710)
• Hangzhou, China
14 Feb 22
"Poetic"is a great adjective,thank you very much
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@sinari (4995)
• Indonesia
15 Feb 22
@choijungeun You are welcome friend. Good luck with your poetry.
