Poem and Art? / myLot

@MommyOfEli2013 (89447)

Rupert, Idaho

June 21, 2023 3:57pm CST

I want to start off by saying that this poem is an untitled one. What do you all think would be a good title for it? I made a few poems to go along with an art design back in the day. This was over 10 years ago I believe. This poem I guess you could say is about breaking free from negative things and starting new, etc... I would love to know your thoughts on the poem here, as well as the art design. Do you like them when I have them on an art piece that kind of goes along with what the poem is about? If that makes sense, lol

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George B Vieto

@Deepizzaguy (122076)

• Lake Charles, Louisiana

21 Jun 23

I can relate to the message of the poem that breaking the bonds of self doubt and fear is the way to happiness and freedom.

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Courtney Dutton

@MommyOfEli2013 (89447)

• Rupert, Idaho

22 Jun 23

Well I am glad that you can relate

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George B Vieto

@Deepizzaguy (122076)

• Lake Charles, Louisiana

22 Jun 23

@MommyOfEli2013 You are welcome.

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Ruby Hawk

@RubyHawk (99367)

• Atlanta, Georgia

22 Jun 23

I like your poem. There are several names you could choose. I like Skies of Blue.

Courtney Dutton

@MommyOfEli2013 (89447)

• Rupert, Idaho

22 Jun 23

Glad you like the poem. I could see that being a possible title name to the piece

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Ruby Hawk

@RubyHawk (99367)

• Atlanta, Georgia

22 Jun 23

@MommyOfEli2013 The poems a good one.

Courtney Dutton

@MommyOfEli2013 (89447)

• Rupert, Idaho

22 Jun 23

@RubyHawk Glad you like it...

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Amber

@AmbiePam (120603)

• United States

21 Jun 23

I love it; the poem AND the art.

I don't know what I would call it though as I'm not very imaginative anymore. Maybe "Flying Free" or "Sky Riding", which would be a play on sky writing. I ain't great at this.