Critique my photo too please
By uiwwitch
@uiwwitch (892)
United States
April 10, 2007 1:07am CST
High fellow photo enthusiasts. I am a self learned wannabe photographer and I would like to share with you one of my favorite photos from one of my favorite places in San Francisco, the Palace of Fine Arts. Thanks for the comments and don't be afraid to give me suggestions and constructive criticisms. I'm still learning and would want to get insights and tips from y'all.
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6 responses
@feris0604 (303)
• Malaysia
10 Apr 07
Great shot, but can we also see the whole of the front instead a snap off like that?
Is that the front entrance?
@lilaclady (28206)
• Australia
10 Apr 07
Looks great to me, I am not an expert but it looks like excellant quality to me, very nice.
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@samson1967 (7411)
• India
10 Apr 07
Rated positively with best wishes. Try to capture the complete structure insead of colomns.
@uiwwitch (892)
• United States
10 Apr 07
thanks for the positive rating. When I go back there I will try to take some more photos of the column. Sometimes I try to break the rules just because I love that a photo can also be beautiful even if it does not conform to the rules. It used to be taboo too to take a photo thats a little crooked or not straight but I look at photography books right now and even popular and respected photographers have bent the rules in some of their works.
@royal52gens (5488)
• United States
12 Apr 07
This photo has a lot of bright colors, is focused and clear. I am not sure where exactly you are trying to draw my eye. There does not seem to be any one particular item or area that attracts my attention. I did find myself looking at the picture from left side bottom to top, across the top and then down the right hand side to the bottom. Kind of in a circle. Is this what you were trying to get your audience to do?? I did find this to be a very interesting photo. Thank you for sharing it with us.
@jaywhiting (560)
• Australia
10 Apr 07
Hello there, The problem with this photo is that the colums arent the center of interest, i see the people as the center of interest, if you are trying to make the columns the main point of the photograph, then you have to make them what your eye draws to, try using photographic rules such as intersection of thirds to achieve this.
You obviously have a very high quality camera or are very good with the lighting and contrast settings because in that respect this picture has perfect colour.
Hope i have helped.

@jaywhiting (560)
• Australia
10 Apr 07
Oooh, you have a digital SLR? Very good cameras they are, i want to get one of them when i can afford it :)
@uiwwitch (892)
• United States
10 Apr 07
thanks a lot for your comment. This is one of my first photos and I actually took it with my Nikon film SLR. I feel so proud with that camera specially now that you said the contrast is really good. I have to upload some of my new ones where I have consciously observed the "rules".








