Jennifer

@CountingStars (5)

China • Age 35

Joined myLot 11 years ago

Enjoy climbing mountains and travelling, making food and create new taste!

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Plz tell me which exhibition profile you prefer?

Jennifer @CountingStars (5) • China 15 Mar 14

I'm writing a paper about how to write a good company profile, and these are two samples, plz tell me which one looks better and tell me why, thank you for your help!

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Bluedoll @CountingStars You are very welcome.

18 Mar 14

Plz tell me which exhibition profile you prefer?

Jennifer @CountingStars (5) • China 15 Mar 14

I'm writing a paper about how to write a good company profile, and these are two samples, plz tell me which one looks better and tell me why, thank you for your help!

1 response

Bluedoll @CountingStars Yes B is very good at convincing the reader that the exhibition is valuable. In the last sentence, the 75 companies from 16 countries might not need the word foreign because all countries are foreign to each other. Also, first paragraph...

16 Mar 14