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I thought that "top 5 ways to entertain a toddler" was very nice. Regarding the "making money online" article, I think that since there are a zillion articles all over the web about this, to succeed with this subject you must create a piece that will be unique in something -- it may be more comprehensive or more funny or bringing new data or relating your personal experience, etc. -- you must bring something new to rise above the crowd. Do you get a lot of pageviews at AC?

Check AC for articles and tips on how to promote or better gain moolah with your articles...I find it is important to keep up with what is going to be popular in search engine results and make sure to title articles and fill them with keywords accordingly... my article about How I Passed a lie detector test is currently the front page article when one first visits the site

I went over and looked at your articles on Associated Content. They looked ok to me. I think the important thing is getting page views, and one of the ways to do that is to make friends. Read and rate their articles, and they will do the same for you. I see this with many people on AC. Other people post their articles on blogs and places like MySpace (not me) to get more attention for them. The one comment I would have about your actual articles is the formatting. It was a little blah to me and seemed like every sentence was a new paragraph. You might want to spruce this up a little...just a suggestion. Good luck with your writing. You can find my articles here: http://www.associatedcontent.com/user/25660/christine_zibas.html