Orange Tsunami
By JackBravo
@JackBravo (970)
United States
May 19, 2007 12:11pm CST
sunset rays alight
on rushing shimmering waves
drowning silent screams
1 response
@JackBravo (970)
• United States
23 May 07
is that majorly good or majorly bad? :)
can you believe it got rejected from associated content - wsn't even asking for money. oh well.
@bronie123 (4587)
• United States
23 May 07
well when i hear that is sound like its a very pretty day then the waves are killing people
I liked how you worded it very nice but to me that would be somthing sad but is that what you were going for
@JackBravo (970)
• United States
23 May 07
i was going for starting out pretty (beginning of haiku) - but then reality, i.e., tsunami hits (middle of haiku) and then you realize it's not really pretty (end of haiku). pretty is just on the surface. under the surface, people are screaming.
