Sunrise, Sunset

@k1tten (2315)
United States
May 26, 2007 9:22pm CST
Call to me oh light, warmth encased Come to meet me on the edge of the world Help me chase the shadows of night away Away from the dawn as we dance on the horizon Barely kissing the waves beneath us Skimming our feet into their depths Then rising to greet the clouds that dance above us Reaching for something we can’t see Pausing only to look below and smiling at our joy Wondering if others see our joy as well Then falling slowly joining in the cloud’s dance Spinning, falling still, into their embrace Letting them lay us on the edge of the world Only to dive beneath the waves Letting the night come again Splashed across the sky A poem written on a spur of the moment. Mine usually happen like that and usually turn out for the best. lol. Anyway, what do you guys think?
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@archer1811 (1098)
• Philippines
27 May 07
i like the poem, i have here picture of sunset, hope this picture help's you to create poems and give you inspiration to write about the sunset
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• Philippines
27 May 07
my husband call if ring of life, he captured that while he is on the sea..
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• Philippines
27 May 07
ring of life - ***ring of life***
oopps! sorry i didnt made it on the first try..
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@k1tten (2315)
• United States
27 May 07
Wow, amazing. It is inspiring. Maybe my muses will help me soon! lol I'm glad you liked my poem. I thank you for the inspiration.