Will you tell about my poem that how you feel it? Can i Love you?
By tsnadeer
@tsnadeer (88)
India
June 12, 2007 12:43am CST
A village girl
Sits Lonely
Looking to Far
And Thinking of
How to Find Food
A river
Moving slowly
Besides Her House
On blue sky
A bird
Flying smoothly
An old man came
In that silence
and asked her
Can i love You?
1 response
@lkbooi (16070)
• Malaysia
17 Nov 07
In a lovely sunny day, a bird is flying freely in the blue sky. A village girl is sitting and thinking by the side of a sluggish river beside her house.
This tranquil and lovely atmosphere could really inspire a person to write a beautiful poetry.
‘Can I love you?’ broke the silence suddenly. Anyhow the caring old man could really warm the heart of the lonely hungry village girl.
