Writing,,,

@sreevasu (2717)

India

June 21, 2007 1:02pm CST

While taking bath the shower stopped all of a sudden The pipe with rust turned still with a whistle My body turned chilled as the drops flow down And a cool breeze through the window stretched its fingers For a moment I felt shivering just for a moment My cloth of wetness Flew away leaving me in nude Water drops now writes few lines in my body

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4 responses

@margieanneart (26423)

• United States

22 Jun 07

You are very talented my friend. Have you published anything? I think you should consider it. Thanks for sharing.

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@sreevasu (2717)

• India

22 Jun 07

Oh, sorry Margieanne, not for publishing. Thank you so much for the encouragement.

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@margieanneart (26423)

• United States

23 Jun 07

We live only one life, so go for it sugar. Do it.

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@sreevasu (2717)

• India

23 Jun 07

Nop dear, just some thoughts and loved to share it with all. Or say it is already published here before you ! :-)

@Phlamingho (7822)

• Denmark

21 Jun 07

Did you write that yourself? Nice :-)

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@sreevasu (2717)

• India

21 Jun 07

Yes, Phlamingho. Thanks

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@mimpi1911 (25464)

• India

3 Jul 07

i know what what they wrote - its all about being you, yourself and your loved ones, your indispensable self and its story..

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@sreevasu (2717)

• India

3 Jul 07

Hmmm....So you read all that!! I feel shy. I am in real :-) blush

@mimpi1911 (25464)

• India

3 Jul 07

yes i did. it doesn't require eyes , i could read through my mind and soul. you need not feel shy, sreevasu.

@pandagirl (71)

• United States

3 Jul 07

love the writing

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@sreevasu (2717)

• India

3 Jul 07

Thank you for the appreciation, it would have been more if you could explain how or why you loved it, though.