poems

poems - my poems
India
July 9, 2007 2:14am CST
Hi friends here is a chance to read through my poems. Please note that these are copywrited. Copying, stealing or tampering would be punishable by law. HERE THEY ARE FOR U TO JUDGE AND GIVE UR COMMENTS. Honest comments please.:) 1. This poem is in the sweet memories of my friend Geetanjali who passed away in 1999. A very dear friend of mine. THE TREASURE HUNT Just a flicker of the lamp and it shone so bright Never again shall it be so dark however black might be the colour of my plight. Long awaited was this moment as if it would never end It appeared as an oasis in the desert yet a mirage when I would bend. A drop, just a drop I wanted though covered by a flood of blood and sweat A pierce through the spine it was The air around so damp and wet. The river is now at its trickles the treasure in front of me laid Though from this treasure I have to part someday hope these priceless moments would never fade. 2. This is about our inhumane society, where the poor are ill treated just because they have no money. AN ALM TO SHARE Alone to the world they came alone shall they leave Yet in this fraternal world we have nothing to give. We meet them each and every day and might give them a smile But when its for the alm they wanted we turn a different mile. If not an alm, A human touch is all that they had wanted Yet in the mid of the day they seem to be so haunted Is there not a human heart that we can try and spare? Cause … all that they want from us Is just an alm of love and care. 3. This is based on mythological representation of our daily lives. Though a long long time ago yet so similar and true. (Reconstructed due to the loss of the original creation). ADAM N EVE As in the bible it was rightly said Just from a rib of Adam Would rise up a new head It was a girl and was named as Eve Meaning a beautiful soul Every moment she would glow Like a diamond from a piece of coal. Adam and Eve grew up together in the garden of Eden playing all day and night Jealous and tired from daily work The devil decided to gift them fright. However, there was no reaction For they knew no fear This made the devil feel defeated Sit and shed a tear. Pitter patter on the green Lay red, blue, yellow and white Angels hovered around in the air The moonlight shining up so bright. Adam and Eve after quite sometime Having together spent Came up hungry in front of the forbidden apple So juicy and with the sweetest scent. The devil was pleased and thought a plan And cheated the two kids to his den Soon arose a sense of guilt Once the forbidden apple had been eaten. The thunder struck and began the continuous heavy rain Adam and Eve now knew reality And wore leaves that they could strain. The garden of Eden drowned The purity of love lost They entered into relations And onto the Earth we all were tossed.
2 responses
@vonne28th (1494)
• Philippines
28 Jul 07
Your poems has a very deep meaning, indeed. But it was so nice. You are a great poet. Just continue it. Good luck!
• India
4 Aug 07
Thanks vonne. Ya i like writing things or speaking things directly from the heart. I am a sad romantic poet, one who has always been betrayed in love but then currently with a lot of good friiends and thus ultimately found some happiness. Do you also write? If yes please do send me some of them. I would love to read them.
@vonne28th (1494)
• Philippines
5 Aug 07
I have a huge collections of poems before but when someonen borrowed it from me, it never returned to me again and start again to write. I like to share this poem with you which i wrote when i was 12 years old. TRUE LOVE I do believe that God above Created you for me to love He chose you from all the rest For He knows I love you best I have a heart and it is true And now it's gone from me to you So care for it just like I do For I have none and you have two! When I go to heaven and you are not there, I'll wait for you at the golden stairs And if you are not there in the judgement day, I persumed you went into the other way So, I will return my angelic wings, My golden harps and everything To prove to you that my love is true, I'll go to hell and be with you.
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• India
7 Aug 07
Dear Vonne. thanks a lot for this wonderful poem. I just cant believe that u wrote a poem this great, and of that depth when u were just a 12 yrs old kid. Its fabulous. I liked it very much and promise u the same. I shall take care of the second heart and meet u when u wait at that golden stairs of heaven.
@hari120 (623)
• India
25 Jul 07
well let me appreciate you for the pain you have taken to type out these peoms, poetry is a good form of expressing one's feelings
• India
28 Jul 07
Dear Hari thanks. No now that i have crossed the post of 500 i am able to copy and paste. So i copied from my stored set of poems. Offcourse all self written and pasted in mylot. Poetry is indeed a route to understand a persons psychology, mind and also the feelings. Yes its the best way to show or express feelings but not very often do people recognise or give the right valueto feelings expressed through poems.