Alone.. a poem

Philippines
July 26, 2007 2:52am CST
Please tell me what you think about this poem.. A dry breeze is blowing The city is getting cold I wonder how many seasons have passed without even a sound? All the people coming and going, bear heavy burdens, Searching for tommorow. within the heat haze wavering the distance. Feelings like sand falling through my hands.. back then, the words that pierced my heart suddenly started to throb with pain but.. I've serached for pieces of my self, counting the endless nights all the while. These feelings are becoming so certain, i almost lose my self. Right now, without fail, i will walk forward, however far. I wonder, why is the sky so vast? Eventhough i tried to yell, my voice didnt come and tears are poured out. I wonder where the birds are flying off to, As they freely slice through the wind? One can't return to the same place As is once was days gone by. Even if i gave up my dream like this, I won't supress my soaring heartbeat. Someday, i want to reach as high as the clouds, I'll spread wide the wings in my heart and journey once again.. Thank you for reading!
1 response
@Pose123 (21665)
• Canada
29 Jul 07
It appears you enjoy writing poetry,and I think you've done well here. If you really love it,keep writing.