Poetry writing

United States
August 22, 2007 12:56pm CST
Who enjoys and gets their feelings out by writing poems in any form? Here is one I have written, please do not be afraid to give me feedback on what you think. Thanks! Secrets Deep Within me lyes myself true Deep inside I always knew My true self that who is me Pure power in me this I believe Secrets I do hide deep inside One day no longer I have to hide Some day, one day, I will share who I am In this time, this day no room to understand So for now my secrets deep inside SO for now this is where my secrets SHALL LYE!! -By J.G.
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@lena2000 (2392)
• Belgium
23 Aug 07
I have so many mixed emotions I have been struck with a love potion I dont know why I feel this way I wish it would just go away Its holding me down I just want to drown I ask god everyday To change my thinking and my way I look into your eyes But only to relize You dont want to be with me A friend is all you see I still have hope But for now I got to coupe I want to be friends but forever tell the end for a little walk or maybe even a talk When you feel alone Just call on the phone I want to be here for you As I step out of the blue Will you be here for me As a good friend in need Best friends thats all I want to be
• United States
24 Aug 07
lena2000, I enjoyed reading your poem, it was really good.
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@lena2000 (2392)
• Belgium
24 Aug 07
A Friend A Awesome F Faithful R Respectable I Incredible E Encouraging N Nice D Dear
• United States
21 May 11
I love writing poetry and enjoyed your poem very much.
@AdalieM (1134)
• United States
17 May 11
Never been so much fan of romances, let alone poetry. However, I enjoy reading a few poems now and then. I am not good at writing poetry, I am too violent. Perhaps if one day give it a try I could come up with a good poem--a sad one for sure.
@Nardz13 (5056)
• New Zealand
26 Aug 07
Hi there. I enjoy writing a little bit of poetry, well i try to make it sound as good as I think it does lol...
• India
23 Aug 07
Welcome my friend to mylotters. i love reading poems.i think you are good poet. carry on friend.