Haiku
By DJ9020
@DJ9020 (1596)
United States
September 11, 2007 12:42am CST
My daughter is into haiku these days. The other night, we were watching a spider in our yard working on his web, so I wrote this for her:
Suspended in night
Moonlight shines on deadly web
Patient spider waits
1 response
@madebyrobyn (616)
• Australia
11 Sep 07
Ooo I love Haiku and watching spiders in their webs!
Innocent beauty
They weave a wicked lace web
To catch all who pass
or
Dew drops on webs shine
Between the rosebuds she hides
Waiting for her prey
or
Weaving quietly
Creates intricate designs
Pretty catchers net
I think yours is much better! I am sure your daughter will love her poem - thanks for sharing :)
