An article i wrote

@surajpkn (582)
India
October 20, 2007 1:42am CST
Hey guys, this is a note of confidence and hope that i wrote. I request some feedback from you. Journey of hope A dream, not what the eyes visions in the long slumber, but what we foresee for ourselves in the future, could incarnate in us all that it would take for the dream to be portrayed real. I believe in such a notion and I lay here feeling the motivation, dedication, concentration and all that is needed, substantiated into actions to feel the existence of what I see in mind. As the goal lies miles away from where I stand, I only see the treasure and feel the urge to make it belong to me. I need to get there, before anyone does and I have found the right path to have it owned. But that path I have chosen is not uncluttered. There are crossroads as I travel to conquer my future and I need to take the right way from there. Nonetheless, there is malice all through my path and I have to win combats, all alone, over the so many malicious forces that assail from all the sides possible. I have come to crossroads and I have experienced taking the right path and making the wrong move but none of this stopped me from aiming what I want and what I think I deserve. I have fought uncountable battles, I won some and lost many but it has never broken my confidence down. I still see my goal far away in what I imagine to be the mightiest ocean where dwells the malevolence, challenge, hardship, desire, agony, pain, solitude, deceit, vengeance and trauma and where resides the hope, motivation, power, ecstasy, emotions, trust, morals, principles, relationship and love. Life is fusion of good and bad and that’s what our path contains as we march through the passage that takes us to our desired destiny. How much ever the cruelness of the venom is, regardless of the number of battles I need to terminate, whatever builds against this expedition of mine and however large it may rise to, I will never let go what I got to grab my future. They can never break me down before I get there, and never even get close to me after that!
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@dani27 (544)
• United States
20 Oct 07
That was very beautiful, just what I needed to hear today after having a really bad day yesterday. Thanks so much.
• Puerto Rico
20 Oct 07
Wow, that was deep. Beautiful, Keep up the good work, your great at it and you might be famous soon.