Underneath The Surface
By VampAmber
@VampAmber (308)
United States
January 28, 2008 1:43pm CST
This is a poem I wrote awhile back. I was hoping I could get some opinions on it. I'd also like to see how others interpret it.
Underneath The Surface
Dive deep into my soulful eyes,
Where all my secrets play and hide
For life takes place behind the eyes,
Eternal struggles and the birth of lies
Run around in sunlit meadows,
Or dare to wander among the darkest shadows
See all that my soul has to share,
Give me the word and I'll take you there
Love me always for what you see,
Behind my eyes, just you and me
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2 responses
@chilenita (473)
• Canada
28 Jan 08
Its abotu your life and how u see it throw your eyes,,,
life is your eyes
I really like it it very cute and sweet and very innocent
it like a lil gril
good job grils
@VampAmber (308)
• United States
28 Jan 08
That's an interesting viewpoint. Thank you for it, I love seeing how others view my poetry. I can only see what I saw writing it, but when others tell me what they think, I can see it through new eyes then.
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@VampAmber (308)
• United States
30 Jan 08
Thank you very much. I think that you're actually quite right. I saw it only as having the right guy look inside, but I guess it does work as everybody seeing inside.
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@miller1978 (1101)
• United States
28 Jan 08
I have to say it's a nice poem. short too. Interpreting it is a bit harder but I take it as someone who wants to show their loved one(s) the many roads they have been on and what they have been through. Nicely done.
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@VampAmber (308)
• United States
28 Jan 08
Thank you very much. I actually wrote it when I was 15, and had never had a boyfriend before. I think I was describing my perfect guy.
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