A poem for a few, a comment for a few others....
By Aingealicia
@Aingealicia (1905)
United States
February 4, 2008 3:54am CST
I have searched far and wide.
Looked in Dictionaries with pride.
However I must confess.
Perhaps I am a bit hard to impress.
Our fearless leader is the Compassionator.(his word not mine)
Has he become a friend of the over raters?
As I have looked far and wide.
Being spoken to with a word from one with great pride.
At the risk of being muted.
I can not find the dictionary that has the word shooted.
So apparently in todays society no matter what.
As long as we can type what ever we put.
It is ok to use words that are unfounded.
Just so we can leave the public completely confounded.
Wait, hold on, I think I just drownded. (See I can make my own words too.)
Yes I know this does not make much sense.
It's not supposed to hence.
To find the answer you must go back.
For the compassionator and shooted words apparently are in our dictionary that should not lack.
Now that that is out of the way,
may I simply say.
With out getting any slack.
Can I have my Volgan poetry back?
All rights reserved Aingealicia
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4 responses
@Helpingfriends4uu (150)
• India
4 Feb 08
It is really very nice, just keep it up my friend, well done.Lot's of God Blessiings and Good luck.:)
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@Aingealicia (1905)
• United States
5 Feb 08
Thank you very much. I love to write poetry. It is one of my greatist loves.
Aingealicia
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@Aingealicia (1905)
• United States
5 Feb 08
Yes it is mine thank you. Poetry is actually my first love and one of my most honest and real thoughts on people, life, and the world.
I will be writing more soon just watch. Got to get over 500 post to be able to post more of them. We are working on that, probably with in a week or so.
Aingealicia
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@Liasonfan (1702)
• Canada
7 Feb 08
Wow that is a great poem. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.. Iam impressed. Did the words just come to you? Or did it take a lot of time to write it. I have written some poetry too. Maybe I will post some of it one day. Brilliant. Good job. Keep on writing!
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@Aingealicia (1905)
• United States
7 Feb 08
Thank you, I love to share my poetry. It just comes to me. That one was written in a very short time. It is just natural and no rewrites. I feel that very little poetry needs to be rewritten, except maybe a word or two to change how it sounds if needed.
Poetry comes from inside. I have another poem up here and am going to post another one up soon. I am working on getting to 500 so I can start posting more of them.
Thank you for your comments and I am glad you enjoyed.
Aingealicia
@asawako48162 (3321)
• United States
5 Feb 08
yes, this is very interesting poetry in motion..i like this very much..
i will give you an A+ and a +
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@Aingealicia (1905)
• United States
5 Feb 08
Well thank you. I will have more coming of poetry and writings, look out for them.
Aingealicia
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