How is my Poem

India
March 3, 2008 7:50am CST
I wrote this poem 6 years ago. And you will be knowing at what time I wrote that after you go through my poem. Go to http://www.poetry.com/ and search with firstname: Sarah and Lastname: Errampalle and tell me how it is.
2 responses
4 Mar 08
i find it boring. i didn't even read the second line. learn to write better
• India
4 Mar 08
Thanks for your Response. You know one thing, my poem was selected for Publication.
@syeryn (574)
• United States
28 Dec 08
I don't read any poetry on poetry.com simply because it will accept complete jibberish just to scam people out of their money. Every poem submitted is "accepted for publication." I don't mean to sound negative but when you publish poetry you are generally the one paid for the poetry you write, not paying money to others for having written it.