Rights
By Leca
@lecanis (16647)
Murfreesboro, Tennessee
March 19, 2008 9:19pm CST
I don't have the right
to touch you anymore
to run my fingers through
your long red hair
or to trail kisses across
your strong shoulders
marveling at your creamy skin
I don't have the right
to be near you
to call you my lover
or my friend
But you can't stop me
From loving you
You don't have the right.
The poetry obsession continues, please forgive me if I'm being annoying, but I can't seem to stop. 
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16 responses
@cynicalandoutspoken (4725)
• United States
20 Mar 08
Is this about the friend that you will never get over? If so it is touching and she lost a good thing when she lost you.
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@sparkofinsanity (20471)
• Regina, Saskatchewan
20 Mar 08
My thoughts exactly - both of you. Cynical's guess and your response lecanis.
Did you know I have red hair, strong shoulders and creamy skin? Weird huh?
Lecanis, would you mind if I got back to this post tomorrow? I have something I would like to share with you here. And perhaps tomorrow your muses will have become more peaceful.
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@cynicalandoutspoken (4725)
• United States
20 Mar 08
You are only transparent to people who stalk you and hang on every word you write like I do 
My secrets out!
My secrets out!3 people like this
@sarahruthbeth22 (43143)
• United States
20 Mar 08
Long , red hair? I am jealous. I love, love red heads.
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@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
20 Mar 08
Ah yes, she has beautiful long red hair. Gotta love those Irish girls. *sighs*
My hair used to be red, when I was very young, but it just started getting darker and darker. Now it gets some really red highlights when I'm in the sun enough, but I couldn't really call it red anymore.
But the woman in my poem has true red hair, and lots of it, and it's just lovely.
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@sarahruthbeth22 (43143)
• United States
20 Mar 08
Alas , it is a redheaded woman. Forgive me, when i read long red hair I thought of my dream man. he has long red hair.Red headed men turn me on but I do admire redheaded women too.If I were bi, I bet my girlfriend would have red hair.
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@girlgonefishing (2174)
• United States
20 Mar 08
You are not annoying at all Lecanis. I have found that I too can't stop once I get going in my writing. Some days I can't write at all and other days I just can't put it down. I'm writing a book and it gets hard sometimes. Last week I finished two chapters and this week I haven't written anything at all. This is a wonderful poem!
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@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
20 Mar 08
It's amazing how that works. I actually wrote a couple others that I posted to my blog, and a few that I haven't put anywhere yet, last night. I do the same thing with my book I'm writing too, writing a lot and then putting it away for a bit.
I'm glad you liked it!
@betsyraeduke (2670)
• United States
20 Mar 08
Hey! I have long red hair, is that for me? Hehehehe...just kidding. That's a very touching poem, lecanis, I like it. You seem quite talented in poetry writing! 
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@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
20 Mar 08
'... you can't stop me
From loving you
You don't have the right. '
I can admire you more for this
You don't have the right..
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@awonderfullife (2893)
• United States
21 Mar 08
Hello lecanis. What a lovely poem! I have noticed you have been writing a lot of poetry since you ran into your old lover. Is this about her? I'm not trying to be nosey- just curious!
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@jeanniemay (1798)
• Philippines
20 Mar 08
Wow! Can I connect the dots? Is is about her? WOW! You awe me with your poems, singing your heart out. Whew! Hat's off! 
@carmelanirel (20942)
• United States
20 Mar 08
Hey, when the creative juices start flowing, give in, that is when the best of the best comes through..
@carmelanirel (20942)
• United States
21 Mar 08
I had an artist friend who always said that the creative people are difficult, I don't know if she said this for her benefit or mine..
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@theprogamer (10534)
• United States
20 Mar 08
Rather indicative of the situation involving unrequited love.
Very true and mind-opening.
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@CanadaGal (4304)
• Canada
20 Mar 08
I have been in the same situation as in your poem. Your words are very powerful to me. I'm glad to see you're embracing that once you truly love someone, you will always love them in some way. ((((hugs))))
@skinnychick (6905)
• United States
22 Mar 08
Gee, I wonder who this one's about? :)
I love the imagery of this one and again nice work!
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@sweetestkate (133)
• United States
21 Mar 08
Who is this girl with red hair? I used to have red hair. It's probably not me. There's millions of girls with red hair right? Great poem.
