What is the effective way to improve my writing English?

well first off it seems to me that your English is very good. Especially since it is not your native language or even in the same family. your marks don't seem to bad to me, I don't think I'd get much higher, and I was born English! the writing was the lowest and honestly most People can't write (well) in any language so I would not let that discourage you any. As for getting better just keep reading and writing and talking to people try to do everything you can in English and you'll start to get better. also maybe you should keep a journal that would be practice for writing and you'll be able to look back in the future and see how far you've come. Hope you have luck in your endeavors If you need any English friends you can send me an invite I'll gladly accept it

i still think that reading is the best way to go.. or if you really want to do well in pronunciation, then i suggest you listen to english songs and try to sing along with it.. then i think practice makes perfect.. create a blog or personal journal and write about anything you want, emotions, dreams, poems, virtually anything.. and in time, you'll do well..

Whatever you have written seems to be good English. But if you still feel that you lack something in English, try reading more, and try conversing more in English with fellow people. Your score is also good for a person who doesnot have English as their native language. I dont know whether I could boast of my English, but right from my primary school I have been educated in English. And I also work as English trainer.

i think your english sounds good, better than white trash in america. you just need to practice it...find people who speak english and talk a lot with them, the more, the better. if i was in china, i would do a lot worse in chinese than you are doing in english. i am always lost in a foreign country. foreign people who speak english well, talk too much. 10 yrs ago, when i first met my filipino friend, she had a thick accent, and once she called me on the phone and her accent seemed lighter. i asked her what happened to her accent and she said she has a big mouth and talks a lot with her american friends. i think that german model Heidi Klum mentioned the same thing on tv once, that she speaks english well because she likes to talk a lot. so, i think you should just talk a lot in english with many english speaking people and read a lot in english as well. the more you practice, the better you will be. also, maybe go in chatrooms and chat in english a lot. practice, practice, practice...talk, read, write....all day and all night in your sleep...

What you are doing on here is a great way to learn to write English better. The more you write and read what people say in return, the easier it will be for you. Practice is the most important thing. Be patient with yourself. Even a lot of people who write English all the time have trouble writing well. As for reading, try reading the online news aimed at young adults and reading young adult books. I am American and middle-aged and I love young adult books, which are often very well written. They will give you a good sense of how to use the language.

I agree with those who said continue reading and keeping a journal of some sort. I also want to add that maybe you might want to try writing stories of your own. It does not have to be lengthy. But just try coming up with a storyline and have some fun. You might find later that the more you write and have fun with it, the words will come. You will get better at it later as you go back and edit or just start a new story. My writing skills has gone downhill since I started college (since I haven't focus on English comprehension skills because of my major) but I've been trying to get back on it and I started writing fan fictions. It's just something fun and motivates me to continue writing. I find it helpful because I begin replacing simple words with more complex ones, plus applying some other writing rules also. (My writing style still lacks a lot of things, but I'm still trying to improve myself.) It might be helpful also that you have a handbook of some sort regarding grammar rules or the like to have as reference while you're writing. If you're unsure of something, you might want to look it up. But the more you write, you will get use to it and then overtime, it will become a part of your writing style. One step at a time will do so don't worry too much since you've come this far already. You will succeed as long as you keep trying. Good luck with everything.