here is a poem i wrote my daughter let me know what you think of it?

United States
April 23, 2008 7:39pm CST
My Daughter Amber You were the second miracle in my life. You had such big beautiful blue eyes. I knew when I first saw you, you had a special uniquemess about you. You were very persistent when you wanted something you never quit. You always keep trying. My sweet daughter, I know some rough and scary things happened to you. But I want you to know that I will be here for you anytime you need me. No matter what you are still my precious baby. I would never find anyone as dear as you are to me. I realize that due to the past you can't help but do the things you do. And I know that you dont want to do the things you do, but we will work through those things, cause no matter what I love you and always will. I have watched you grow up more and more everyday. Soon you will be a teenager, well on your way to being a beautiful smart young woman. And becaus of the things that happened you will need extra patience and understanding. I will do the best I can to help you try to live a happy life. When you need guidance and are needing direction you can always come to me for anything. When you do finally grow up and are ready to leave me I am going to worry about you the most. Cause you are my risk taker and you are going to test limits. And you're going to be a rebel, but you will survive cause you are strong and i know you will be able to take care of yourself. But, Please remember when you're out in the world I will miss you and always welcome you back home with me. To my precious baby Amber, Mommy loves you always no matter what
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• United States
24 Apr 08
Anyone who can take the time and share how they really feel for a loved one makes the world go round, great job
• United States
24 Apr 08
thank you much your response is greatly appreciated
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
25 Apr 08
You must have a very special young lady daughter and she has a very special mom also. Your poem is so lovely and something shewill wantto keepfor allher life. You show us what a good mother is like and how to follow in your footsteps. Amber is lucky to have a mother who lives up to the bestof what mother means to most of us.You also are going to allow her to test her wings but still be there for her if she should wobble a bit. thanks for sharing a lovely poem with us mylotters. You remind me a lot of my own mother.