Need Some Opions People!!!!!

United States
May 27, 2008 11:29am CST
This is a poem I wrote in a moment of depression the other night and I wanted to know what you thought of it and if anyone can relate to it? I feel like I am being sucked into the bloack hole of death the death of the inner me screaming for someone to take my hand and pull me out I feel alone and lost and though as strage as this may sound not fully conscious and aware of whats going on around me the pain is slowly eating me alive the tears drowning me the salt from them burns my badly broken heart holding on not knowing how much longer the sadness weighting me down reaching for someone thats not even there I feel my mental grasp slipping away slowly will you take my hand and pull me out?
2 responses
heatherhedyjon
@heatherhedyjon (122)
• United States
27 May 08
Well dear, in my opinion-you need help and fast. if you don't feel close enough to a friend or family member-call a professional. A place where I have found support in droves is on a site called wisdomology. Check it out.
sxrxnrr45601
@sxrxnrr45601 (1171)
• United States
27 May 08
Well its not how i feel all the time it was just in one of those, moments of depression that I am sure we all deal with. Most of the time I am very happy. But thank you for your advice and I will be sure to check out the site. I am sure it will be helpful. I think alot of it is in my head since I am haveing a hard time dealing with getting older and where I am in my life.But,thank you again.
heatherhedyjon
@heatherhedyjon (122)
• United States
27 May 08
Well, if anything, it moved me enough to respond and want to help. I would like to say I know where you are-but no one ever does, but I can promise you I come close. If you check out the site-I'm heatherhedyjon there. You know where I am if you need someone.
sxrxnrr45601
@sxrxnrr45601 (1171)
• United States
27 May 08
I did join the site and I like so far iam not sure how to add anyone but if you would like to add me its sxrxnrr45601 on the site thank you again for the information
dmillman
@dmillman (2273)
• United States
27 May 08
It's hard to follow without capitalization and periods and commas and such - it just looks like one long run-on sentence. If you could make it easier to read, then I could give you my real opinion.
sxrxnrr45601
@sxrxnrr45601 (1171)
• United States
27 May 08
Well that was kinda the point it just keeps going on and on. The hole Confusion thing. But, Thank you for responding to it.