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@gxnfly (1147)
China
June 5, 2008 4:00am CST
I just started my new job.The company is thinking of expand overseas market,so they need an English version of the website.I just wrote a brief introduction of the company,but I'm not sure if the grammar and experssions are perfect.Can someone kind read it for me,and change it a litte to make it perfect? as you know my mother tongue is Chinese. Here is the introduction: Duan Dian Hand painting was found in 2005, named Ou Ni Wan Hand painting Studio in the past. In July 2007 registered as a Limited Company with the registered capital of millions of RMB. The company mainly engaged in various high-quality hand-painted artworks. It includes produce, design, painting, and products delivery. Designers and painters are all graduated from Xian Academy Of Fine Arts. It has a super productivity and wealth of creativity. The company's products are all for the limited edition, each product has its unique code/name/significance. Duan Dian icon and Duan Dian DD (icon) are brands of the company that has registered with the exclusive copyright. We will do our best to meet your satisfaction! Thank you a million
1 response
@littleowl (7157)
5 Jun 08
Hi gxnfly-I actually didn't know your native tongue is chinese thats lovey--I think the introduction is fine you have made it very explanaitory and your wording is fine there doesn't seemto be anything wrong with for me-perhaps the only thing is if you are selling these paintings then to include a postage and packing charge-see what other mylotters say-your friend littleowl
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