looking for feedback, what do you think? any ideas on a title?
July 2, 2008 11:18pm CST
Standing On the cliff The edge of My life Chance is the Air I breath Happiness My parachute The drop is Reality Fragility Of the human wings Never Meant to fly Clipped, tamed Even broken Yet Still I soar On air With happiness And here I am Standing. copywrited. 2008
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4 Jul 08
thank you so much!! the ultimate goal of all my work is to be painless for the reader. No matter who you are or what you've been through, i like to think anyone can relate to or even just "get" my writing. your idea for the title actually gave me a new insight on the poem itself. Great suggestion!!!