Wasted

July 4, 2008 9:24am CST
I want to lay inside your arms so I can boldly fake it I want to give in to your charms and act as if we'll make it I have the apple in my hand and I can almost taste it don't mean to hurt you, understand but then again, I'm wasted
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@Gerean (60)
• United States
11 Jul 08
Holy Cow, Vegbunny. I truly admire the combination of intellect and raw emotion that comes through in your poetry. I for one, would be interested in reading more and challenge you to write from both I.Q. and spirit to make a difference in the lives of others...positively. A quote I heard once says, "Writing isn't that difficult, all one must do is open a vein and bleed (upon the page)." ~Author unknown. You have a tremendous gift.
@singout (980)
• United States
6 Jul 08
LOL. Loved your short rhyme vegbunny. You have a knack.
@klaudyou (501)
4 Jul 08
Nice game!