I am
By RK Finnell
@irishidid (8687)
United States
July 6, 2008 4:19pm CST
My first copy and paste poem. LOL
I am simply complicated, haphazardly designed
willingly stubborn, roughly refined
selfishly giving, uncertainly sure
generously stingy, wickedly pure
suspiciously trusting, quietly loud
richly poor, humbly proud
gently violent, viciously kind
hatefully loving, briefly consigned
delicately harsh, graciously mean
exquisitely plain, dimly keen
feebly strong, savagely humane
naively sophisticated, rationally insane
3 responses
@raclie (1732)
• Singapore
7 Jul 08
i love it!!!!
i think it is honest and it makes a lot of sense
it shows the contrast of what you are and how it all fits...
it shows how you have anyalse yourself and how you know what you want in life
@greenline (14838)
• Canada
6 Jul 08
That was excellent. I am very much impressed. Only one line I got scared ! That is "willingly stubborn" ! That's pretty scary ! LOL ! Just being friendly ! That was a beautiful poem. Keep writing. I can sense you are a gifted writer.
Do you like writing brief reviews about things in life ? Let me know, if you like to.
@irishidid (8687)
• United States
6 Jul 08
I call it juxtaposition poetry.
I'm trying to expand my writing experiences so I'd write reviews. I'm going to do an interview with an actor and I think that will be a learning experience.
@graceandowen (1637)
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6 Jul 08
wow did you write this yourself?
it is very good and also refreshing to see other styles of poem not jus the usual :)
