Read the story I wrote and comment here please.
By soham1357
@soham1357 (187)
France
    July 21, 2008 10:43am CST
                         
            I entered this story in a short story contest. It's titled "30 SECONDS".
Please read the story, and please vote for it, if you like it.
The link is http://dailywritingtips.com.
It is the fifth story from the top.
Comments and critiques are welcome.
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