this poem is called why dont't you?
By sourcherry
@sourcherry (159)
August 18, 2008 6:53pm CST
every morning when I wake up I look over to you and think to myself how lucky I was to of had you. Those brown eyes and big lips, strong arms the same arms that used to hold me through out the night. your smile, your laugh, the feeling of completion of not having to worry about anything because I had you and thats all that mattered. your smell your touch that way you could give me chills with just one look. Why did you have to go why did you have to move on, why did you fill my head with all those lies about love and picturing us getting married why don't you miss us being a coup how do you not hurt like i hurt or miss me as much as i miss you "Why"?
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4 responses
@rosedust82 (2066)
• Philippines
19 Aug 08
Poems have always been a reflection of how I feel... and I'm assuming that that is how you feel right now as well right? Doesn't matter if it does not rhyme (poems can be free flowing), as long as you get to say what you feel, that is what matters. Hmmm... Don't ask why... just say "thank you" for giving you the chance to love someone better... 
@sourcherry (159)
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19 Aug 08
but the thing is i am so in love with him that i think i stop myself from even thinking about moving on as well since we have broken up so many guys have asked me out and i have turned them down just for the simple fact that i want him to tell me there is still a chance i think i need medical attention
@deathtofluffy (74)
• United States
18 Aug 08
Hmmmm. . . It's a descent poem but a little on the messy side. Regardless, it's very depressing. Sometimes people only pretend to care to take advantage of you.
@sourcherry (159)
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19 Aug 08
well thank you for your comment its been awhile since i last wrote but all the feed back helps
@rbailey83 (1428)
• Canada
19 Aug 08
well written, thought it was very good. i used to write poems but haven't done so in years now. keep it up! 
@leen511 (32)
• Malaysia
19 Aug 08
hi..i don't really know how to comfort people but i feel to tell you that if he left you, don't think too much..you used to have a good memories with him..but if you continue to thinking "why don't you",the memories will not longer sweet but will turn up into a weapon that torturing you..it's impossible for you to let go him immediately,so give yourself some time and don't force yourself to think or not to think him..give yourself a chance to get your freedom and smile back..whenever a relationship is past then it wont come back anymore..keep your memories as a sweet memories but remember that memories means.."past"..sorry if i said something wrong..i just hope that you can go back to your happy world without him..cheer up..
