what do you think about it

I'm not heavily into Sci Fi stuff, but this seems promising. Again, I don't know much about what it takes to come up with cool scientific ideas. But I do think you have something there. Hopefully others will take the time and read what you have to say. I think it's time for more original stories like this. Keep up the good work.

Just type http=======and end with the four numbers. There is no need to put the url in brackets before that unless you want to avoid giving your number. Another way is to post it on your profile page as your web page and tell us to look there. I took a look at your start of your novel and it is quite good as far as the plot goes. It gives the start to the story. Just find someone who also knows French and English to help you out with grammar and spelling, and if you do not want anyone stealing it when you get better joining an online critique group for members only. I know I needed them when I first started.

Keep working , and you will be successful. I wish you good luck. Writing is my hobby too. I write articles and reviews.