Just One Life!

India
September 18, 2008 2:22pm CST
Just One Life! Just One Life One Just Life Miles To Go Smiles To Give Cheers to Spread Happiness To Share One Just Life ... Just One Life! how is the poem?
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7 responses
@kyellis (105)
• United States
18 Sep 08
It's a very sweet poem. However, what if we have more than one life. Many religions believe this and I have for most of my life. It never made sense to me that God only gave us one chance to be "good" - that's what I was taught in Catholic church. So you mean God is so unfair that he gave the beautiful blond a movie star voice and the starving black child in Africa each one life to do with what they would. Ugh! Now if you believe that we each get to come back and perfect our soul more with each life until we have shared all of our experiences with God (which he can not get on his own as he is not a person) until we are Christ-like. Then that makes mores sense to me.
• India
21 Sep 08
hmm yes may be all religions believe that we have and also GOD is not so unfair but we dunno wats tomorrow for sure anyway so just enjoy this day this life to the full.
18 Sep 08
wow, it's a great poem... yes, we live only once, so use this precious time as efficient as possible... because we regret everything at the end, and we are in the beginning right now... just think about everything we'll do, think about the advantage and disadvantage... don't make other people sad... just always smile and the world will smile with you...
• India
21 Sep 08
Thank you very much for ur appreciation.Yes life is so small and wehave only one now so live it to he full :)
• India
18 Sep 08
really gud buddy...and try as a poet..buddy....
• India
21 Sep 08
thank you buddy :P
• India
20 Sep 08
hi friend i have hobby of poetry in hindi because i write in hindi. but when i read poems in other language i concentrate on there thoughts , and your poem has good message for people. we have just one life and lots of thing to do, but positive thing is that , god bless us with such a precious work to give cheers to spreed happiness , that is necessary for us to have a cheerful and satisfied life . have fun dear you poem is very nice hope my comment is not bad take care have a nice time
@jzjqdkd (273)
• China
20 Sep 08
wonderful,it reads easy and fluent.and is full of meaning inside the poem,at the same time,it looks beautiful.maybe the last one sentense can be improved by some rectifying,it is just my idea,maybe not right ,in a word ,i like it.
@DawGwath (1042)
• Romania
19 Sep 08
Interesting approach, but it sounds to me more like a song's lyrics :P You should try writing a song too, if you have any musical knowledge.
19 Sep 08
Have you read this one ? "The woods are lovely dark and deep......but miles to go before I sleep." This is written by a famous poet whose name I forgot.