Only You Know
By mookhor
@mookhor (304)
India
September 20, 2008 7:57am CST
Only You Know
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silence !
the dusk is very close.
silence !
a hide is near.
only you know I'm with you
and an envious star stretches
its pencil arms
towards the best treasure of the universe,
your lips,
I mean.
silence !
there'll be a bang in my heart
resembling those chimes of the bell long back
sprouted from an aryan temple.
silence !
no more I can bear --
only you know I'm with you
alone.
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This is one of my pieces.
Will you please read this and oblige me ?
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2 responses
@workinggurl (399)
• Philippines
11 Nov 08
Don't know anything much about poetry but I like reading it ^_^
@RhythmWalker1 (825)
• United States
20 Sep 08
Mook,
This is a very sensual read that flows to the heart
of your love. Your choice of words to portray the depth of your emotions
is awesome. The way you guided the stars and universe straight to your love
is very appealing!
