how did you say I Love You/???
By sambhavana
@sambhavana (226)
India
September 26, 2008 5:51am CST
When i fell in love i wrote these lines to my love on a card and expressed my love to him. These lines were-
Like a white rose you bloomed in my life
All sweet fragrances you filled in my life
You are sweet and thoughtful because you are you
You have made this world a brighter place just by being you
My lips smile when i think of you
My face glows when i look at you
Every thing seems to be as pretty as you
Because everything now includes you
To have the best in this world i would choose you
But then the fear upsets me that i would loose you.
I have written many poems for him but this one is very close to my heart as for the first time i expressed my love in writing.
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12 responses
@rednoah1328 (33)
• Philippines
26 Sep 08
There are many ways to say i love you to your love one, but for me i always did it in singing.... I am singing a love songs and then at the end i will say i love you always... i always did...
@sambhavana (226)
• India
26 Sep 08
Singing i guess is beautiful way to express your love. Carry on.............
@LadyMarissa (12148)
• United States
26 Sep 08
BOTH poem & song are wonderful ways to express your love!!! As one who doesn't have the talent to do ether, I just look him in the eyes & coo I love you deeply!!!
@shana123 (2095)
• India
28 Sep 08
Hey bhavana is your boy friend name sam or ur full name itself is sambahavana..??
Well the poem is quite romantic and it was sounding very awesome.. will post this and ask my guy to write poem like this for me lol.. what did your guy tell after reading this ? Keep writing poem and add everything in a blog , bet you may get many impressions in your blog ,another way to earn more :P
@sambhavana (226)
• India
29 Sep 08
Neither my name is bhavana or sambhavana nor my husband's name is sam. It is an imaginary name for mylot. Thanks you liked my poem. I have written many such poems. I will keep posting. Thanks.
@welsen (89)
• Philippines
29 Sep 08
Yes...it's nice anything anything to somebody and especilaly about love...it so very sweet...you can feel how wonderful in love.
@hallmarkjl (500)
• United States
26 Sep 08
I use to leave him little notes saying "I love you" and just little sweet things. I'd write one up and leave it next to the table or somewhere he'd find it. I always knew when he'd read it b/c he'd walk up to me and say "I love you too baby" Another way I'd say I love you is by not saying it at all. I know that sounds totally weird, but it works. It is the little things you do that lets him know that you love him. Like for instance, buying him a hat with his favorite team, making him breakfast in bed, kissing him, hugging him. I also look straight at him and tell him just how much he means to me and that I love him more than anything in the world.
@mookhor (304)
• India
26 Sep 08
Many a times I have to fall in love as to my consideration women are the most wonderful substances in the world. To me, woman means beauty. I wonder how does this substance incorporates beauty inch by inch.
I do not ever say 'I love you'. Whoever she is, she understands, because my eyes say and my countenance say and my gesture and the tender tongue and all of them jointly convey the three little words 'I love you'.
Really this happens.
@benita2008 (102)
• China
27 Sep 08
I don't think I fell in love with anybody, even my ex. but I remember I wrote something in the letter, when we misunderstood each other and almost broke up. A few days later, I was told he went out with friends, back home, always drunk and depressed. I was sorry for that and thought carefully about the future of us. Finally I decided to be with him and wrote a letter, saying,"If you want to make flowers in full blooms, let's water them together....".
@aanthe (61)
• China
27 Sep 08
i like your poem a lot! it's so great! i feel like you are such a talent girl! i wish i could write such beautiful words to my girls! the first time i expressed my love to her is at colleage, when i was drunk, i send her a message via cell phone saying i love her..
