One more poem

United States
October 2, 2008 6:27pm CST
This is the last poem she (my daughter) has so far. It's another poem about how she felt when her and her boyfriend broke up. A really good heart felt poem. What do you think? I'm waiting for her to do a short story. But it might be a while as she is writing her book. I Need you: http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/I-Need-You.275889
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@carmelanirel (20942)
• United States
2 Oct 08
another winner!!!! I can't wait to read her short story, can you tell me what it is about?
• United States
3 Oct 08
Thank you! She is writing a book that will be published as a book and not on that site. The book is about a valkyrie, vampires, and a werewolf. I can't give any more info on it yet though, other than it is very good! The short story she is writing is about a girl who is having trouble with her mother and she tries to run away from them. As she is running she finds some one who tries to help her and they end up falling in love. And there is a twist to it all...
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@webeishere (36313)
• United States
2 Oct 08
Another good heartfelt poem. Thanks again. HAPPY POSTINGS FROM GRANDPA BOB !!~
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• United States
2 Oct 08
Thank you again! It will mean a lot from her to hear that!
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• Canada
3 Oct 08
Great work! Thanks for posting this.
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• United States
3 Oct 08
Thank you!
@checapricorn (16061)
• United States
3 Oct 08
[i]Hi angel, She is very good in choosing right words to describe her feelings! The readers will really feels every word of it! Congratulations for her and for you![/i]
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