A poem: Blinded with sunshine

@mojcica (1512)
Slovenia
October 4, 2008 5:01pm CST
night owls come and undress me take my soul and tear it apart four it is coloured in blackness it's dark come and caress it and make it more black it is the whiteness I want you to take give me serenity for my heart is aching so hard from breaking and falling apart I need you to come to uncry and unbreake me I need you to come I'm trying to save me By me :)
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@Jezebella (1446)
• United States
6 Oct 08
This was a great piece. I like the make it more black part really shows your pain and heartache. Another good part you have is "give me serenity for my heart is aching" I love it.
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@mojcica (1512)
• Slovenia
6 Oct 08
Thanks a lot for the compliment and respond!
@anaknitatay (1335)
• Philippines
5 Oct 08
nice. this is one of those goth poems isn't it?
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@mojcica (1512)
• Slovenia
5 Oct 08
Thank you! Now that you meniton this it does resamble goth poetry. Never thought of it that way. The poem talks about pain and heartbreak and how I cant fight the feeling, even though I want to, so I welcome the dark powers to overcome me since fighting is too painful. Thx for the post!