A poem: Blinded with sunshine
By mojcica
@mojcica (1511)
Slovenia
October 4, 2008 5:01pm CST
night owls
come and undress me
take my soul
and tear it apart
four it is coloured
in blackness
it's dark
come and caress it
and make it more black
it is the whiteness
I want you to take
give me serenity
for my heart is aching
so hard from breaking
and falling apart
I need you to come
to uncry and unbreake me
I need you to come
I'm trying to save me
By me :)
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2 responses
@Jezebella (1446)
• United States
6 Oct 08
This was a great piece. I like the make it more black part really shows your pain and heartache. Another good part you have is "give me serenity for my heart is aching" I love it.
@anaknitatay (1335)
• Philippines
5 Oct 08
nice. this is one of those goth poems isn't it?
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@mojcica (1511)
• Slovenia
5 Oct 08
Thank you!
Now that you meniton this it does resamble goth poetry. Never thought of it that way. The poem talks about pain and heartbreak and how I cant fight the feeling, even though I want to, so I welcome the dark powers to overcome me since fighting is too painful.
Thx for the post!
